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Dear _________________:
Thank you for sending me the _________________. You've done a good job of specifying the need for the project and in developing a general plan for implementing it. With a few key revisions, I think we'll be ready to send it to _________________ for final approval. Here are the areas of revision that I'd like you to work on:
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I am confident that you can make these changes promptly. Please send me the corrected version by _________________. Feel free to call me if you have any questions, or to discuss any issues about this report.
Sincerely,
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