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Dear _________________:
Thank you for sending me _________________.
You've done a great job on these types of reports in the past, and you did a good job in this case _________________. However, I am a little disappointed in the number of revisions this report will need.
Perhaps you've had other things on your mind, but I believe this project will require your complete focus for the next few _________________ until these changes are made. We need to _________________.
Here are the key items to revise:
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I am confident that you can make these changes promptly. Please send me the corrected version by _________________, and feel free to call me if you have any questions or to discuss any issues about this report.
Sincerely,
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